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Tears falling onto my pillow
As I picture you there, lying next to me.
Memories of you
Like a moving photograph
Keep dancing through my head.
I could reach out to feel the warmth you had for me.
Dying embers.
All that's left.
Dying embers that will grow cold in time,
even if my heart still warms for you.
I don't want to forget what it feels like
Having your lips pressed against mine.
Feeling your breath on my neck,
Resting your cheek on my own.
And who will be there to wipe the tears from my eyes?
Will you hold me even if you won't keep me?
Just to clasp you tightly to me,
To have ever held you was a gift on it's own.
©2005-2009 ~Rabbit-eyes
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I'm happy to have been with you, reguardless how it hurts.

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This is very well detailed. It reflects the pain that you are going through and t tells the reader what you feel. I see alot of pain and suffering in this piece. I hope you get better soon. No one especially you deserves to go through this type of pain. I am very glad you shared it especially in this form.

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Well, despair can be a gateway to beauty, I suppose. Without strong emotions, we wouldn't have strong poetry. Same goes for all other forms of art. So even as sad as I might feel, something good can still come of it. I like to have my work overflowing with emotion. Don't worry about me, though, Bri. I've got myself into a stronger mind set now (many thanks to you for that talk we had the other day), and I believe I'll be okay now. :3 :heart:
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Never a problem. We have known each other for a very long time and it's not like we are complete straners talks are good, they ease the mind. Its been proven by fancy schmansy scientists! :) You being in a stronger mindset is good. Your work over flowing with your emotions is even better.

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